*****
The Sahara . . . . . . Not the one in Vegas
Can kill you . . . . . . .with all the lights
Blinding red . . . . . . . and the heat
Burns your eyes. . . . . without fire
*****
3 out of 4 customers surveyed preferred Trigee to a solution Caster Oil and Saltpeter. Do you agree?
Trigee fills me up; Caster oil empties me out. Saltpeter... I'm afraid to try.
Reply:[It's "Castor oil."
As is my wont and obligation. I brought this to the attention of the Board of Directors of the Poetry Section, Division of Unctuous, Oleaginous, and Orotund Discourse. They recommended I undergo a surgical procedure that involves the removal of the cranium from the anal sphincter.]
You continue to improve your ability to use this form, which I am told was concocted by a crazy Marine in Kansas. After a tornado hit him in the head with a cow, he decided to write a different verse for each coast.
Reply:Maybe change "lights" to "light". Kind of lost me - in the 3rd part - with the Sahara and all the lights ??? ♥
Reply:This one is cool. I like how the juxtaposition of the two 'Saharas' blend together. Very nice.
Reply:I would rather.......drink castor oil
and saltpeter......from Tyler durden's
asre crack.......than listen to
another one......of your dotty trigees
Reply:Absolutely!
Reply:That's cool, what kind of poem is that?
answer mine?!?!? http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;... please?!?!
Reply:Whooooo-eeeee,
Someday I'll get to leave Wisconsin for a vacation.
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